Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high, while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high, while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, governments and people value sports in various fields so tangibly. So, some believe that the sportspersons’ wages are more than enough and are not in harmony with other people’s salaries. However, some maintain athletes are role models of every nation and they deserve handsome money and lavish life. I concur with the former group.
On the one hand, supporters of sports claim there is a burden upon the shoulders of sportspeople. They have attempted to defeat their opponents since their childhood. Moreover, sportspeople could affect the history of their nations. For instance, nobody can forget Maradona, a successful soccer player from Argentina. So, it is justifiable that athletes are valued highly. Furthermore, they participate in many international competitions and meetings and they compare themselves with their counterparts in other countries. So, authorities should pay specific attention to sportspeople.
On the other hand, some people can never digest astronomical money invested in sports. In fact, there are many groups of people who are really hardworking and have vital roles in a society. To exemplify it, doctors and surgeons have a really tedious job. Not only are they knowledgeable but also they perform difficult surgeries every day. In other words, doctors and scientists have prominent roles in uplifting the standard of living. Personally, I think there ought to be a balance in the salaries of different groups of people and it is not plausible to highlight the roles of sportsperson unfairly.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although sportspersons have indispensable positions, the disparity between the salaries of sportspeople and others is not reasonable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pay specific attention to sportspeople. On the other hand, some people can never...
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...rtspeople and others is not reasonable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49811320755 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14191226382 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2014867617 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7222222222 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145039499132 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396645300692 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428003112459 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941694646734 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351353551297 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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