Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers Whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in education of children Discuss both of these views and give your opinion

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers. Whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Some argue that assignment plays a vital role in children's education. While some believe that pupils should not be given homework. In my opinion I think student should be given assignment for continuity of learning at home. This essay will discuss both views.

To start with, assignment should not be given to children because it will not allow them to learn basic things such as morals, culture, norms and house works needed to survive in their community. Giving them homework will keep them busy and will not allow them to learn fundamental things they ought to learn. Studies have shown that about 85% of students given assignment lack morals , culture and norms due to inability to learn basic things at home. Thus, school work should be done in school not at home.

However, roles of homework in children's education can never be over emphasized. Thus, giving little one assignment help to keep them busy reading books at home there by improving their understanding and it also helps on continuity of learning. Furthermore, not everything they learn at school they understand. Giving them assignment will allow them to study more and improve there understanding. For instance, research conducted in 2020 on some pupils in the same class shows that children that were given assignment perform excellently in class compare to those that were not given homework. In view of this, he work is very crucial in student education.

In conclusion, assignment is very important in child's education while some argue that student should not be given assignment because it may affect other training at home. Both side of the argument has its own benefit but in my opinion I think assignment is very crucial in student education.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04195804196 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58844449811 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.708688543 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294123280736 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113057482008 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862694345247 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209077047327 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869263719913 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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