Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Homework exists in all levels of education, from elementary to university, students are mostly given homework as a task to improve and remember what they've learned in class. Some people have views that young students aren't capable enough to receive homework while the others think that homework is crucial for their studying process. As far as I am concerned, school children don't need to be given any homework at all.
On one hand, people think that homework should be compulsory in all education system, including the children. The reason is that learning from main courses in class gets the students to know about the knowledge while doing homework at home helps the kid to brain-storming as well as remembering it since learning it only once is very easy to forget. Furthermore, doing homework daily after school build up a kid's studying routine, which help them to manage time more better.
However, on the other hand, forcing young children to do homework is quite a stressful and challenging task. Since kids already have long studying hours in the actual school itself, additional learning at home is not necessary. Instead, the amount of time they have at home should be used for leisure and with their family, especially parents. Nevertheless, children are not fully developed enough in order to have such ability to control and manage doing multi-homework in many different subjects.
For my personal thought, instead of giving homework to young students, teachers should advise students to spend their time chatting with family, doing other useful and simple tasks such as helping family with house chores or exercising.
In conclusion, homework has been a controversial topic for most of young students' parents. In my point of view, I argue that children should have their free time doing more beneficial activities rather than homework.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14238410596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63505639673 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9253611013 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27857172013 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112745739428 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058649244092 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16931623424 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406771555826 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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