Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are so many controversies around the homework of infants. Some people believe that children should be assigned homework by their tutors while others argue that the children should be left free at home. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail.
To commence with, Children had spent most of their time in schools only. They were completely worn out due to the hectic day spent in school. If their teachers give work to do at home, again they need to do that work with their exhausted brains which lead to depression, mental illness. For example, As per the scientific survey, Children who do homework were suffering from numerous mental disturbances than those who didn't. Consequently, It is better to let them play or talk with their parents or friends after school instead of making them stick to their books so that they can relax and stress-free.
On the other side of the coin, Some people suggest that it is good to revise daily what they had learned in their school. If they did not practice daily what they were taught by their teachers, It is hard for students to recollect all the syllabus within a short span of time. To exemplify this, math should practice daily to do quickly. Furthermore, teachers should also give minimum work that would be helpful to enhance children learning. For instance, if a tutor gives tons and tons of work to practice at home, children will always try to escape from doing their work. But if the assignment is short they will finish it in seconds to play. By assigning these short assignments makes children stress free especially on the day before their exams.
In conclusion, Teachers should give short and effective assignments which will help to revise the concepts taught in school on that day is good to enhance children knowledge as well as their mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.753125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3643160183 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9211879344 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4705882353 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286800543913 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921764584677 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743829573071 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200659152679 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652472093979 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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