Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is believed that the most superior path leads to a prosperous career of youngsters is educated in an academy or an institute, whereas the majority of people think that offered an occupation just after finishing high school maybe create more conveniences for adolescents. From my point of view, I am in favor of those who support the former opinions.
On the one hand, it is unable to deny the fact that starting a job immediately leaving school brings a large variety of perks to young people. Firstly, stepping early into life through possessing a profession not only helps youngsters independently about the financial condition but also creates more opportunities to accumulate practical skills such as communication, negotiation, and problem-solving. Therefore, the easier they learn from earning the easier they apply in your career path. Secondly, the more adolescents get an occupation after graduating high school the more amount of money their family could save, which means their family can use this fund to invest in other demands in order to improve the life quality.
On the other hand, despite vivid benefits from getting a job after leaving the school of the young generation, I strongly hold a belief that joining in an educational institution or college might be a superlative wisdom choice for youngsters to reach a prosperous business. For the best, there are a number of specific jobs that require to graduate a university or an institution especially a doctor or teacher since professions mentioned play a pivotal role in the thriving and the development of every country. As a result, people who own these degrees are offered better positions with greater incoming than others is worth and unable to debate. Not to mention that the qualification is the prior and key contributing factor behind the recruiting talent for a company or assigning a person in a higher post when they compete with other candidates owing to they had to accumulate and cultivate their knowledge after a constantly long period of learning.
In conclusion, it seems to me that adolescents join a university or an institution is the fastest and the most convenient route which paves the way for their future than an abundance of youngsters who opt to seek a job when they leave high school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0765171504 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93854411693 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.798222259 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.909090909 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4545454545 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172525292126 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599657112659 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314137472951 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993896973467 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250776174328 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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