Some People Believe That Teenagers Should Concentrate On All School Subjects But Others Believe That Teenage Should Focus On The Subject That They Are Best At Or That They Find The Most Interest to what extent do you agree or disagree | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some People Believe That Teenagers Should Concentrate On All School Subjects. But Others Believe That Teenage Should Focus On The Subject That They Are Best At Or That They Find The Most Interest.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed by some people that teenagers should focus on all subjects at school , while others believe that it is not a good idea to learn about all subjects , they should learn about the most enthusiastic subjects and subjects which they are very good at them. Although there are a number of problems associated with learning all subjects , because of some compelling reasons I agree with this statement.

To begin with , the fundamental reason is that all students do not have equal talent in same subjects . Hence, learning about subjects which they are not good at or do not have interest could be a waste of time for them. instead they can spend time on lessons which they are prominent or interested in them. For example , some teenagers have special talent for music while they have no interest in core subjects such as math , science or biology .Therefore ,focusing on music would bring them more benefits.

In contrast ,there several reasons which supports the idea of learning all subjects. Firstly , it is mostly common among teenagers that they are not aware of their interest . Thus, learning about all subject may clarify their interest or make the interested in new subjects. Secondly, sometimes teenagers misunderstand about their favorite subject , and this is mainly because they do not have sufficient enough knowledge about it. So if they learn about all subject ,they will probably find their interest easily.

In conclusion , despite the problems asserted above , I personally take the view that teenagers should be taught about all subjects.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09727626459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54628116426 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0369368145 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429187457661 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166722035083 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110337323898 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262042172385 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118172481956 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments