Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Punishments for crimes play a pivotal role in moulding the society towards an edified and better society. Every individual pay for his crimes according to the laws of the country.
While deciding on the punishment there is need to look at all the facets clearly. Sometimes the intention and motivation is totally opposite to the crime. We are living in a society where a lot of political and personal discrepancies result in involving the opponents in crimes which they have not committed. Keeping in view, such cases it is the need of the hour to take into account all aspects. There should be proper investigation before apprehending someone. For example, Nelson Mandela was a philanthropist and he was sentenced for several years because of his movements like civil disobedience. His aim was to achieve equal rights for the Black People and to uproot racism. All the proceedings against him were totally political. In his case, it was totally injustice to punish and treat him like other criminals.
If we want to eradicate evils like rape, assassination etc then it is necessary to have fixed punishments for such criminals. In order to maintain law and order in a society a criminal must have the fear for punishment that he will be given in case of a specific crime. Fixed punishments are also necessary to create a sense of equality between the poor and the rich. Everyone in a society should be punished for breaking the laws irrespective of its cast, creed and financial status. For example, Nawaz Sharif, the former PM of Pakistan is in jail. He is convicted for corruption charges and he will face all the procedures like common people in the society do. This will play a conspicuous role for enhancing people's confidence on law and to create a sense of fear against crimes.
To recapitulate, punishments play a preponderant part in any society for the sake of peace and serene ambiance. So, there should be a proper system of investigation regarding the decision of punishment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91420118343 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89052043144 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529585798817 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3409491423 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.05 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302277140178 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891916257909 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507484642612 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187881106417 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318733294632 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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