Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Visiting other nations has become popular recently. There’s a debate about whether local customs and behavior should be followed or the host country needs to accept cultural uniqueness. This essay will discuss both sides of the issue and offer my view.
There are several reasons supporters might suggest. Traveling for pleasure is often the main purpose for the majority of visitors. Due to their desire to escape from daily lives with endless commitments and be immersed in a new and exciting culture, travelers tend to be more open and receptive. Secondly, local customs and behavior are unspoken rules to ensure any society’s stability. Without complying with these, unnecessary trouble might come to these newcomers. For instance, visitors to the USA may be considered rude if they ask for a woman’s age or someone’s salary which makes sense because these are private matters Americans rarely share with strangers. In brief, the travelers’ respect for the local culture can result from their prior interest in exploring the new place. More importantly, it can help them to get along with people during the trip.
However, other arguments are seen by opponents. First of all, it’s easier said than done. Visitors need to follow the present culture’s values but in reality, even the locals are not fully aware of all the social cues themselves. Furthermore, problems travelers can get into because of misunderstandings could be prevented. One of the effective ways might be doing better research on the destination’s culture and getting advice from people who have been there before. Another reason to promote cultural differences is the benefits foreigners can bring. It could be their knowledge, skills, or experience. This can be seen in a great many scientific conferences and expert inviting trips that have occurred globally. In such cases, local people will listen and be willing to accommodate the visitors’ needs which usually include resting and eating habits. Besides, countries like Vietnam where tourism plays an essential role might benefit by showing friendliness and tolerance. This can lead to bigger economic gains in the long run. To sum up, respecting cultural differences brings more good than harm to the host country.
In conclusion, both views have their reasons. In a particular situation like Vietnam, it will be in our best interest to maintain a balance. We only interfere if serious harm to our values is going to be done by an outsider and for the rest, we should show empathy and understanding.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26178010471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83334609848 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641361256545 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5018234933 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4444444444 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1481481481 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.51851851852 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200640957877 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481679605405 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392736971093 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121455830038 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280129686061 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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