Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Thesedays, with the development of society, travel oversea is increasingly popular. This has led to a lot of problems involving the preservation of local customs. Some people say that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour, while there are others argue that different cultures should be welcome in the host country. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
On the one hand, it is widely accepted that understanding the beliefs, traditions, habits and custom of the host country is the great way to travel across this country. For example, in Saudi Arabia - an Islamic country, visitors should dress discreetly instead of trying to be fashionable with short skirts or shoulder strap dress, which shows your respect to the traditions and culture here. When everyone get use to the customs, they will find the culture of the host country more enjoyable and easier to approach to. Besides, by trying traditional cuisines, join traditional festivals,… people can broaden their horizons.
On the other hand, there are many people keep their own traditions while visiting other countries. To some extent, local people should try to accept this for the reason that visitors find it challenging to the new customs. Tourists will be more comfortable, confident and socialize if they keep their own customs and beliefs in a new environment. Moreover, by accepting the new traditions, local citizens can improve their knowlegde, enrich the cultural basis of their country. As well as that, it helps them to make some changes to attract travellers and boost the tourism development.
To sum up, the argument works both way. Although it is undeniable that accepting different cultures helps with the visitors while they are in a new place, I hold the view that indigenous customs and traditions should be respected and followed by all the tourists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as well as, to sum up, as well as that, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15434083601 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73622416224 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3132428218 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344595180763 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104616713732 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124495676081 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217592164312 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103125664315 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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