Most of the urban cities around the world are densly populated. Urban communities undergoes innumerable pitfalls due to this population explosion. This essay will enumerate the potential difficulties faced by the urban people and how to tackle these issues.
Nowadays people prefer to live in urban areas for various reasons as a result these places become overpopulated. First of all pollution can be the most annoying issue of concern for the city dwellers. Lack of space between the house holds and improper waste management creates a number of health issues for the public. Water bodies are polluted with domestic and industrial wastes which will make the water unfit for drinking. Communicable diseases can spread fast in cities as there is no or less distance between the households and people shares the facilities. For example Malaria killed about one million people in UK in1990 because of the polluted water supply. Moving next violence and theft are the devastating trouble's in cities; people who lives in these area often loses their wealth and life from these issues. Gangsters drug addicts and smugglers will make potential risks to the urban community more than that of the rural nighbourhood. people are even frightened to get out of the room after sunset in some cities like Mexico because of these gang activities, hence these things makes city life miserable.
On the other hand, there are plethora of means by which the city life can be improved; starting with imposing strict environmental laws In addition proper waste management and provision of safe water can improve the people 's health abruptly. violence and illegal activities should be controlled by allocating sufficient guards at problem areas. Proper lighting and surveillance cameras can reduce the illegal activities up to an extend. The culprits should be punished phenomenally; so that the others wI'll follow the same mistakes. For example the new president of philippines introduced shoot at sight Warren for drug abusers which shown an I'm midi ate results.
Overall, problems are inevitable in urban society hence public should work hand in hand with authority to hurdle these situations. proper awareness of the society we lives will give us the opportunities to improve the quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, well, as for, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22615803815 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65637530614 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596730245232 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1885539261 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.947368421 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0751576338289 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234587311867 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229221094795 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470843177173 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193499526167 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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