Some people believe that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally nurturing than aggressive.
To what extent do you agree.
It is seldom argued that females have a more calm personality than males as they possess soothing and caring traits, while their counterpart men are quite tough. I completely agree with this viewpoint.
To begin, women are more sensitive than men, as they up-take several roles, such as that of a mother, sister and wife, which require them to showcase greater support for others, especially their family members. Whereas, due to this prevailing thought of ‘toughness’, males prefer to be less sweet and rather bottle-up emotions instead of expressing themselves. For instance, psychologists have elucidated that men in the Middle East are exposed to greater expectations of the society, making them the least vocal gender, in contrast, fair sex exhibits greater mildness due to less creative restrictions.
Furthermore, even at workplaces, ladies are soft spoken and easy to get along because of their welcoming attitudes; this allows them to have a wider social circle. Likewise, greater patience aids them in keeping a cool mind and accomplishing all the tasks flawlessly; which is necessary to keep one fresh. Simultaneously, women who are homemakers calmly manage all the chores and take out time for past-time activities such as, sewing or watching television; hence, keeping themselves engaged in creative works helps them concentrate better and manage emotions through art. Besides, greater attention to self-care routines helps them retrospect and balance mental health.
In conclusion. it can be deduced that due to several reasons like societal restrictions and expectations of family, men choose to stay rough and less expressive. On the other hand, women are better at handling stress and can keep themselves actively occupied in activities which enable them to introspect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...o keep one fresh. Simultaneously, women who are homemakers calmly manage all the chores...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48201438849 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91251420403 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640287769784 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5785614286 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.545454545 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105259929886 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374038342501 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487714113688 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743314060888 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509745903963 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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