Some people believe that women should play an equal role as mean in a country's police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A few individuals argued that females can perform the jobs of police force or military forces as equally as men like army jobs. Nevertheless, opponents assert that, these type of jobs are not suited to them. I will discuss both the viewpoints along with my own opinion in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with perspective of some individuals, I would like to say that, today's woman is winning every field excellently such as science, politics and education that proves, women can do every uphill task. For example, there are some honorable females such as, Kalpana Chawla an astronaut, Indira gandhi a minister of the country so, these women set an example and showed how strong a female is. In this way, the work of police force, military force are not difficult for the women as people think it is. Even, in this kind of work, women will excel by doing their best with the help of skilled and efficient brain and they clear the typical exams and able to get these jobs and do better than males. So, it is pointless to say that, they are less able to these kind of occupations.
On the flip side, others opposing this view and I will further justify their point that, people think women are physically less strong than men. Their body structure is not similar as men have as well as females are sensitive and not enough strong even by heart that means, they are emotional. Moreover, training process are little tough for them because of lack of strength so a few individuals prefer men are best suited for these kinds of jobs.
In my perspective, I support the former viewpoint because, I think If a female can do best in other fields so, the occupation like, army job is not enough difficult for them. However, they are less strong as compared to men but they can structured their body by doing hardwork on it and will do workouts, gymming etcetera. In this way, they will overcome this hurdle and will able to face every hazardous task or work.
To conclude, although women are less powerful but it does not mean that they cannot do it. Their hardwork and heavy workouts will make them able to do thesekind of difficult jobs so it is worthless to suspect on their ability to do anything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...s of police force or military forces as equally as men like army jobs. Nevertheless, oppon...
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Line 5, column 760, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...less to say that, they are less able to these kind of occupations. On the flip side, ...
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Line 13, column 238, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'structure'
Suggestion: structure
... strong as compared to men but they can structured their body by doing hardwork on it and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66071428571 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40116887882 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8445509677 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21540814702 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792843669152 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720126309499 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119638232567 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761801987344 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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