Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but
also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at
least 250 words.
Some people choose to eat neither meat nor fish because they hold a belief that may be better either for themselves or for the society. I am in favour of the opinion. This essay is to represent some reasons in order to support this opinion.
First and foremost, eliminating calories from meat or fish is actually do wonders for people’s health. To begin with, people every day eat many kinds of food to produce energy; therefore, not eating one of those give them a chance to consume more and more fresh food like vegetables and fruits. This will help people get lean. Also, a refreshed and healthier body results in a satisfied mood and excellent work. Moreover, countless health problems may be caused by consuming too much protein. Many citizens, including both children and adult, suffer from diseases such as obesity, diabetes, heart attack and cancer… since they overweigh.
It is true that rejecting meat or fish brings about some advantages to the world too. Firstly, as I discussed above, there are too many health risk caused by daily diet, which will add a burden on state budget for the cure expenses. Take America as a significant example, this country spend a fifth of health expense for obesity each year. Furthermore, the world has witnessed a dramatic decrease in wild animals and natural fish. That may have a huge effort on the global stability.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea for the above-mentioned reasons and illustrations. A proper diet is the key to a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64897457181 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658914728682 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4237388274 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.125 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304318367343 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831711821162 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664324872141 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178002579494 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878048702601 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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