Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while other people argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that medicines and other products are tested on animals bring numerous advantages for people. While many people believe that humanity should be undertaken those experiments, I would argue that animal testing is morally wrong.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why a limited amount of animal research is necessary for the development of medicines. Firstly, experiments using animals also have been taken into action for so long time, which support for experts to invent diseases treatments. As a result, it helps people to improve the standard of living. Secondly, some studies are dangerous for the human, whereas, it is safe toward some particular creatures. For instance, supporters in the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved.
On the other hand, I suppose that they should not use animals for mankind purposes like medical tests. One reason is that animals play an important role in the balance of the ecosystem of the biodiversity process on earth. People should protect them because many wild animals are killed just for medical experiments. In addition, it is an unethical action that Government has enacted laws to save creatures, especially rare animals. To be specific, laboratory rabbit may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured.
In conclusion, although whether to use animals or not for benefit of humanity is still a controversial issue, it seems to me that it is better when stopping creature testing to ensure that the next generation could exploit the animal resource.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01444043321 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73362683291 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8047721722 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30812019066 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105221752162 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629720502671 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183401518153 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483136800991 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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