Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because in has more influence that other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, news media plays a more and more important role in our daily life. some people advocate the contention that newspaper is still the most important origin to get the newest information for every citizen. I completely disagree with that view point, considering that online news media has become the most influential media format.
On the one hand, newspaper is not the fastest approach to get knowledge of the latest affairs all over the world. Since manufacturing a batch of newspaper includes the processes of editing passage content, press newspaper and deliver it to the reader who books it, the whole procedure usually takes at least two or three days. However in the contrast of internet media, as soon as the news is public, every person can get acknowledged of it. For example, the first time Notre Dame Cathedral was burnt down by an unexpected fire, many people instantly know the information and prepare to offer financial aid package to France government.
On the other hand, electrical media also has some edges that newspaper doesn’t obtain. it is becoming an effective and feasible method for the public to participate in politic activities. For example, many governments or press have built their official website where normal people can read news, write comments about particular issues or discuss relevant affairs. Therefore, this website transformed into a convenient medium to convey public thoughts on new policy or other affairs to relevant officials.
In conclusion, due to the excellent advantages, internet new media has surpassed newspaper and become the most important source to acquire the latest news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27376425856 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72391467236 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.915187864 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210374193063 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767824634362 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494084459087 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125214070683 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464666928335 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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