Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because in has more influence that other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, news media plays a more and more important role in our daily life. some people advocate the contention that a newspaper is still the most important origin of newest information for every citizen. I completely disagree with that viewpoint, considering that online news media has become the most influential media form.
On the one hand, the newspaper is not the fastest approach to get knowledge of the latest affairs all over the world due to essential flaw. Manufacturing a batch of newspapers includes the processes of editing passage content, print newspapers and deliver it to every subscriber, which means the whole procedure usually consumes at least two or three days. However, in the contrast of internet media, the interval between the occurrence of news and the time people get informed of it will not exceed several hours. For example, the first time Notre Dame cathedral was burnt down by an unexpected fire, many people instantly know the information and prepare to offer financial aid to France government in order to rebuild the notable cathedral. Therefore, in terms of propagating speed, online news media has overwhelming advantages on its counterpart.
On the other hand, electrical media also has some edges that newspaper doesn’t obtain. it is becoming an effective and feasible method for the public to participate in politic activities. For example, many governments or publishers have built their official websites where normal people can read news, write comments about particular issues or discuss relevant affairs. As a result, these websites are turned into a convenient medium to convey public/civic thoughts on new policy or other affairs to relevant officials.
In conclusion, due to the incomparable advantages, internet new media has surpassed the newspaper and become the most important source of acquiring the latest news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39322033898 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85947825922 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4917384792 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223708377633 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774650924014 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487499186033 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131493928038 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489939547205 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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