Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Certain people opine that the design of all the houses in a particular area should be same, while other people have opposite views and they contend that authorities should allow the masses to construct their houses according to their choice. In the following paragraphs.I will explain the advantages of constructing houses with same designs and with different ones.
To embark on, there are several benefits of building apartments with the same layout. Firstly, the houses look well structured and give a neat appearance. Secondly , by constructing houses with proper planning provides more space for other activities such as for construction of parks, shops and many more. For example- flats in cities are planned buildings which include many other essential amenities inside the building that no one can think of.
Similarly, building houses in different styles has its own merits. On the one hand, people can construct the houses according to their personal choices, can give any look to their house and can add any facility according to their wish. On the other hand, for joint families, requirement of hosing change as they require massive space, which they rarely find in apartments with same layout. Furthermore, every individual has different financial status, so everybody cannot afford to make big villas, houses, because of this reason council should give permission to people to construct their houses according to their income level.
To conclude, building the houses with same layout or different layout has their own pros, however I believe it is the personal choice, need and monetary status of person that depicts in which design the people are comfortable to construct houses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, as for, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30740740741 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57716784343 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8684081038 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10424170569 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042632250383 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316958867039 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724348894362 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261134363235 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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