Some people claim that there are more disadvantage of the car than its advantage. Do you agree or disagree?
There are many aspects of the car such as positive aspect and negative aspect. Some people have argument that more negative aspect of the car than positive aspect. I disagree, because positive and negative aspect of the car is equal. Almost people in the world has a car moreover now most leasing finance is cheap if people want to buy car. The car is luxury goods and the price is very expensive. Several countries have competition to production of car and give cheap interest if some people use lease finance.
The car is not obligatory need to daily activity but to emergency situation the car is very important. However, who buys the car have to prepare a lot of money. Now days, financial leasing establish one way to has a car, pay down payment and remain can pay by installment. Commonly, positive aspect for the car cost of tax every year, need a lot of money to prepare maintenance every month, cost of assurance to car very expensive and price of the car has depreciation, there is inter fence because of car. There are, also positive aspect for a car, comfortable feel go to everywhere by car, can bring everything suited capacity of car, look for earn money to available rent car.
So, there are many advantages and disadvantages of car depend on the needed. The car is luxuries goods to middle society but to businessman and businesswoman car become obligatory need. Especially to big family very important to belong car and car has many benefits to support their activity.
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Essay evaluation report
Almost people in the world has a car
Almost people in the world have a car
Sentence: Now days, financial leasing establish one way to has a car, pay down payment and remain can pay by installment.
Description: A verb, present participle or gerund is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to leasing and establish
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and has
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to remain and can
Sentence: There are, also positive aspect for a car, comfortable feel go to everywhere by car, can bring everything suited capacity of car, look for earn money to available rent car.
Description: The fragment feel go to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace go with verb, past participle
Sentence: So, there are many advantages and disadvantages of car depend on the needed.
Description: The fragment car depend on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace depend with verb, past participle
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. try this pattern:
paragraph 1: introduction. Your ideas/opinions here.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side A. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I support side B. reason 1 + why reason 1 + example for reason 1 + a small conclusion for reason 1.
paragraph 4: In addition, reason 2 + why reason 2 + example for reason 2+ a small conclusion for reason 2.
paragraph 5: conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 260 350
No. of Characters: 1198 1500
No. of Different Words: 128 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.016 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.608 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.578 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.051 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.477 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.596 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.192 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...car such as positive aspect and negative aspect. Some people have argument that m...
^^
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interred'.
Suggestion: interred
...e of the car has depreciation, there is inter fence because of car. There are, also p...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292682926829 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121951219512 0.0946595960268 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0522648083624 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00696864111498 0.0437548338989 16% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0905923344948 0.122226691241 74% => OK
Participles: 0.01393728223 0.0403226058552 35% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.63363260727 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0522648083624 0.0326793684256 160% => OK
Particles: 0.00348432055749 0.00163938923432 213% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0766550522648 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00696864111498 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00348432055749 0.011925033212 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1496.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75384615385 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315384615385 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234615384615 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176923076923 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111538461538 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63363260727 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.037074148 76% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515384615385 0.56093040696 92% => OK
Word variations: 49.3775767073 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5714285714 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4856447415 49.517814964 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.857142857 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.814263465372 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 42.032967033 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.96551724138 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265993983429 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142359830221 0.102741220458 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108130202245 0.0668466124924 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.591881771522 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112163701377 0.148594505496 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135622900775 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659881928009 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.539134758977 0.324371583561 166% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0197006585335 0.0638462369009 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206620171642 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629546195355 0.058150111329 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 67.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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