Some people consider sports to be their career and role in the society. For others it is mostly a workout to keep fit. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports play a large role in society. They are the means by which certain people earn a living, and for others, a way to stay healthy. Both approaches come with benefits as well as drawbacks.
Certain sports like football and basketball have become so famous that they are known as career sports, and have attained the title of the highest paying jobs. Footballers and basketball players are among the richest individuals globally and being on popular teams provides them with a platform to make an impact on certain world issues. Many players, for instance, have used their influence to bring about awareness to global issues such as climate change, world poverty, and hunger. They have started charities aimed at improving people’s lives and have become role models and symbols of hope for some of the most distraught people on the planet.
On the other hand, those not playing professionally, while not accumulating wealth, still reap the benefits of staying fit. They have improved lifestyles, live healthier and longer, and also tend to enjoy playing sports as a pastime activity. For some, athletic activities such as running and swimming can be a way to unwind after a stressful day or a way to connect with friends and family, while others who have had a limb amputated or are suffering from certain disorders like paralysis may use such activities for physical rehabilitation.
Though many argue that it is better to earn while playing rather than spend money on buying sporting gear and equipment, in my opinion, it is better to engage in a sport for fun. Those that play for money tend to lose sight of why they began playing in the first place and it turns into a race for who can be the most popular or richest. Furthermore, after sustaining injuries, professional players tend to find themselves out of a job, sometimes without another career to fall back on. Playing for fun however, sets a certain goal for people, whether it be for leisure purposes or for staying fit, and after this goal is achieved, people are free to go back to their chosen career path without feeling like they have let themselves down.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...thy. Both approaches come with benefits as well as drawbacks. Certain sports like foot...
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Line 7, column 677, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...ple are free to go back to their chosen career path without feeling like they have let...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88186813187 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57528093838 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9507005115 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.928571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230144677256 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07956962865 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489520371181 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140924895897 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272902962511 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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