Some people get into debt by buying things that they do not need and cannot afford. What is the reason of this behavior? And what action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
Buying things which are even getting into accumulated debt for unnecessary ones and perhaps be unaffordable has been made by most people. This can be attributed to social acceptance factor while the financial awareness also supposes to be committed as preventable steps of this issue.
Initially, the principal reason why most people are getting a saddle with debt especially for unsubstantial objects is being a fascinating issue to be talked since being an acceptable person in the social life may require a branded gadget as an adequate factor. To illustrate this phenomenon is that people are trying to keep up-to-date with the current smartphones by buying over and over, which simultaneously involves money consuming, in resulting a debt exceed. For instance, the recent study held by Manheim School of business Germany found that 80 % of labors in Stuttgart did not conceive that they possessed enormous debt by falling into a habit of spending their million euros to recognize for purpose to modernize the gadgets. How can it happen? Based on the result of interviews and questionnaires which were held on the day after the research study showed that Germany people tend to be inadmissible in their community unless they would try to keep upgrading their gadgets particularly.
The treatable steps suppose to be created to acquire for purpose in tackling the subordinated debt, which is commonly called “spending after investing concept” and this frame supposed to be as personal consciousness as the repartee of this symptom. How is the concept working then? It is dealing with the priority of scale which means people suppose to go through with more investment for primary needs and do more saving for the future than stay proceeding with the up-to-date gadgets. More importantly, the escapade campaign from the government can be expressed as the extra mile step aids to get out of debt habit, which is owing to excessive behavior. Besides, the curable campaign can be showed in numerous ways such as by spoken, written, photographs or packaged by three of them, which is more absorbable for most people. For instance, the recent survey from Finance News.com shows that a significant decreasing number of exorbitant behavior folks in Berlin had placed in 30 % after the government engaged in couple of campaigns. As a result, people tend to realize sufficient finance management that the more assets they place, the more beneficial effect they will get later on.
In conclusion, it is explicated that the major elements to deal with debt is about a preposterous behavior and occur for major reason of being acceptable in the community by frequently upgrading for the latest smartphones which requires an adequate finance management. The preventable steps can be established by personal awareness of investing before spending concept and it can be also supported by the government's campaign as the extra miles stage to leave out the mounting debt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 479.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22755741127 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90005066676 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524008350731 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8617796969 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9375 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258725769758 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882534988993 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463656045846 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176243666215 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390065655284 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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