Some people prefer shopping in shopping centers while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?
The shopping places which are considered to be increasingly more popular than outdoor markets are supermarkets and shopping malls. On the one hand, there are a number of advantages to shopping in malls. However, on the other hand, hardly would shopping malls completely replace local markets any time soon.
To assess the reason why people are seemingly attracted to shopping centres, we must bring their benefits into focus. Assuming food quality was a safety concern of a buyer, she would feel reassured doing the shopping at supermarkets due to the fact that the goods must meet the strict government regulations. Being organized into aisles and having a cleaning person, supermarket stock, especially foodstuff, is more hygienic compared to those at street markets. It is also the categorization of shelves which makes it easier for shoppers to find what they are looking for. Moreover, in financial terms, not only are there special offers every now and then, which is friendly for the customer’s budget, but payment can be made using plastic money or e-wallet as well.
Although so far, one can readily draw the conclusion that going shopping at malls is more convenient, we must take into account the pros which traditional markets have to offer before judging which one is better than the other. As a result of the lower space lease and tax, as well as hiring cost, the price per item at markets is less expensive than that at supermarkets. On top of that, buyers have the freedom to negotiate the price and reach an agreement that is reasonable to both of the sellers and the buyers. Another appealing characteristic of open-air markets is that all of the foods and vegetables are fresh. This is because they are directly picked and delivered from the farms or seaports and sold only during the day.
Putting both sides into perspective, I arrive at the conclusion that local markets seem more attractive to me. What I care about most when I do my weekly shopping is whether the foods I will be eating are fresh and whether they are within my budget.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...owever, on the other hand, hardly would shopping malls completely replace local markets ...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...erms, not only are there special offers every now and then, which is friendly for the customer’s b...
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Line 5, column 579, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...racteristic of open-air markets is that all of the foods and vegetables are fresh. This is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, then, well, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90028490028 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61853276194 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8555168355 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222421245898 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761831970917 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681591274652 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149959643792 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798647055602 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.