SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO SPEND THEIR LIFES DOING THE SAME THINGS AND AVOIDING CHANGE. OTHERS, HOWEVER THINK THAT CHANGE IS ALWAYS A GOOD THINK.
DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
There are certain consideration of factor which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine what the pros and the cons of doing the same things and avoiding change compare to other’s view which is change is always good. I certainly believe that changes in our life has more advantages as well as contribution. The reasons on my stance is based are discussed in details below.
The first reason coming to mind substantiating my stand point is concerned with this issue that there is less possibility to discover innovations without changing something. The best example that fit this notion is my experiences. When I was a young, I was very selective person as well as avoiding try to new taste about food. Furthermore, I had not eaten many kinds of food until 15 years old. Then I tried Kurdish traditional food, It was amazing delicious. Since that day, I have not been distiguishing any food. On the other hand, doing regularly same things is quite boring. It goes without saying that in order to be happy, changing is one of main rule of life.
Another vital reason which deserve some word here is that changing something in our life might also change our psychology as a affirmative way. It is important to consider most of the women like shopping, when they are feel bad. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the subject is my elder sister. Whenever she argues with her boyfriend , always going to mall and shopping . This is such a way that doing someting different and forgetting sadness moment.
Having considered all the aforementioned grounds discuss above, I am of the opinion that it is crystal clear two major factor which are the innovation and changing psychology my means of positive way I explained. Therefore, there is no doubt that I prefer doing different things instead of the same things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83911671924 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70807207196 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615141955836 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6238984812 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189316094839 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493076716117 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535436717136 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119319795221 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501074302233 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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