It is considered by many people that doing similar activities without changing are good while the others like alterations all the time. In my opinion, I agree with the second group who likes the change and always avioding the same things.
On the one hand, it can be understood that people do not want to change in their lives because of the scareness of deterioration of the situations. It is quite hard and stressful to get out from the comfort zone for introvert people and their psychology could not ready for newness. For example, meeting with new people is pretty fraustrating or starting a new hobby could be tough in many ways. Additionally, the most challenging part of the making change is the possibility of the things getting worse.
On the other hand, our lifetimes are pretty short in this world and time passes relatively fast. So, if we want to live our lives fully, then we should be open to new novelties. Also, many people do not want monotonousness in their life due to boredom of repetition. Acquisition of several life experiences makes people feel alive and helps them to satisfaction. I also agree with these view owing to try different things is instructive and exciting. I think, people should do new activity and change their daily routine or maybe get into a fresh group of friend even if they are in adversity.
In conclude, some people want to do changing in their lives although some people are not prefer to do alterations and keep away from differenstness. I believe, changing is good decision for avoid to sameness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun life seems to be countable; consider using: 'several lives'.
Suggestion: several lives
...o boredom of repetition. Acquisition of several life experiences makes people feel alive and...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...heir lives although some people are not prefer to do alterations and keep away from di...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, then, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8029739777 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74187699776 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7815234817 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350481400814 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113820262074 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071169101824 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223369187091 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625969075149 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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