Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Some part of society believe that digital games can sometimes become a good tool in education and are a mental-safe entertainment. However, others said say that virtual games will affect the players themselves negatively. This essay agrees that the demerits outweigh the advantages with the reasons below.
To begin with, games which is provided in digital device are thought to have both entertaining and educational value. Users or players are transported into the imaginary world that even opined to be more exciting than the real world is. Besides, many game developers, either in console or computer, now are providing creativity as well as logical thinking games such as puzzles games. Thus, this means video games can provide educational purpose too.
However, as beneficial as the virtual games are, they have still so many flaws or drawbacks, especially when it is played in a long period of time. Not only will it make the player’s athleticism to be reduced significantly but also their personal social life may be affected negatively. Playing games in front of digital device means that the player will not have any significant movements during the playing. The lack of motion may risk the muscle to be untrained and consequently will make the body become weak. This is very concerning situation and the youngsters will be affected more terribly. Moreover, games can absorb the user’s attention completely and make the user to be ignorant toward their friends or even their parents. This kind of phenomena will result an anti-social person and clearly this is not a good things.
In conclusion, although games are thought to have a good value such as educational as well as entertainment purpose, the disadvantages of video games just too massive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17421602787 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78558299412 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.018248022 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241544200502 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842231939718 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071340786963 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172677854842 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508426577307 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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