Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
A question which many of us have to ask ourselves is whether various forms of advertisement are luring buyers into buying more than they can afford or they are increasing awareness of useful commercial products. On one hand, I am inclined to believe that shoppers undoubtedly must take into account the financial risks which are inherent in advertising. On the other hand, hardly can we deny the effectiveness of advertising as a business tool.
To assess the potential danger of commercials, we must bring the monetary aspect into focus. Assuming an individual was enticed into buying non-essential kitchen appliances solely because of the attractive visual appearance, he might later find his kitchen counters occupied by this equipment. Not only would such an individual never touch those items, but he would also find his money, as well as time, being wasted. In addition, the amount of time that they have spent on scrolling or looking at the screen on their personal devices could have been used for doing other domestic chores such as preparing a meal for the family or spending time hanging out with their kids. Another risk they might fail to avoid is being tricked into buying products of low quality.
Although one can readily draw the conclusion that adverts have proven somewhat risky, we must put the benefits of them into perspective before judging whether they are truly bad. Being used as an instrument by businesses to market products that they are proud of, advertisements inform prospective customers about how those products are capable of improving everyone’s life. For instance, a nine-to-five worker may find it time-consuming to do research before making a purchase since there is a heavy workload waiting for them to finish, whereas they can just take a look at some television commercials and figure out which brand is well-known and trustworthy. On top of that, a well-designed advertisement is also a creative work of art that conveys both the aim of the company and artistic inspiration.
Taking both sides into consideration, they point me to the conclusion that in principle, advertising can be a great source of information for the consumers, but in practice, those customers must be cautious to not get carried away by their spending habits. As is for everything else in life, moderation is the key to lasting enjoyment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09793814433 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90673663511 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600515463918 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.58767429 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.285714286 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138976743995 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471452055406 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038647814083 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838694556779 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429753170365 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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