Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Nowadays, advertisement is everywhere in society and nobody can escape from it. It has been discussed that the effectiveness of advertising and some people say it’s not attractive to people anymore. To my mind, although it’s getting harder to convince people to pay for something, I believe promotion still plays an important role in the sales of a product.
To begin with, traditional ways of promoting product have become less effective in persuading people to spend money. Various posters, imagines and videos overwhelm costumers in daily life and even create a negative impact. Even though advertisements can be seen on all kinds of media, such as on the TV, website and bus stations, the outcome of luring people to purchase is limited. To be specific, if there is no need to buy a new car, people will not go to the 4S store after watching a video about a coming model in the cinema. This is why companies need other strategies to advertise.
To consider another side, it is significantly profitable to promote the product with targeted groups of people. With the development of advanced technology, it is not uncommon that companies, together with internet business, post advertisements on social media for certain consumers. For instance, if you searched for a flight ticket to Brisbane, you could notice that there were numerous posts about fantastic hotels on your Instagram home. Thanks to AI analyses, advertisements have been more successful to find their potential customers and to demonstrate the goods and services to those who need them.
To conclude, old-fashion ways like sticking posters on the streets is no longer helpful for the product turnover, while finding the targeted customers can be far more effective. Companies should put some of the budgets on intelligent promoting strategies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94165421201 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640677966102 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5380759078 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220015290288 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069751372241 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727036921845 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125604300755 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744827787646 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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