some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, in modern societies, the level of health in the general population is decreasing and that is an alarming problem. There are many conflicting views about how to solve this issue. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle. However, there are some people who doubts about the effects.
Advocates of this solution assume that the sedentary lifestyle or busy working conditions meant that people do not have time or they do not want to spend their time to exercise. If there was an easy way to reach the local sports facilities such as increasing the number of sports facilities in many places, they would be more likely to take part in sports activities like a regular part of their life. Moreover, if more sports facilities were offered, doing a variety of sports would be much more attractive than just sitting in front of a screen every night. Besides, the levels of fitness and interests should be suitable for each age groups. For example, some students at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on football matches.
However, there are some reasons why this solution may have some effects on many people. For example, physical activity has a hight tax, that makes some poor people do not afford to work out. Besides, the producing of fast foods, tobacco and alcohol is rising day by day. Nowadays, people often by many kinds of fast food to eat instead of preparing good diets because perhaps they are busy with their work or when they or when they get stress in their work, they often have the trend to buy tobacco or beer, wine to make themselves comfortable. So, even if we build many sports facilities, that will not affect them. On the other hand, there are many other solutions to improve people's health. For instance, by installing exercise equipment in parks, this has some benefits such as parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise.
In conclusion, focusing on sport facilities is not enough to improve public health. People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fasts'?
Suggestion: fasts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86898395722 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46312418574 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7128658582 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206293358425 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071346619846 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718740606749 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124326169854 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194222809836 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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