Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
most of the member of the society espouse the concept that the best way to upgrade our health standard is developing more sport treatment, while the others have an opposing notion. From my point of view, it depends on the person itself because the government can only persuade the public to excercise more with the sophisticated sport infrastructure. thus, this essay will interpret these accrosing stereotype of the society.
On the one hand, many people lack physical activities because there are not adequate facilities to create a good excercise habit. this sparse occasion is caused by the unawareness of the ruler to offer a persuasive idea and an adequate sport center for the public usage. the researches conducted by the scholar in the world have provided evidences of this phenomenon, it actually support the idea that most of the member of society do not care of their health because they think that the sport facilities are not enough for all public utilization. thus, the better our facilities, the more people will excercise, and the better our helth standard will be.
On the other hand, many people agree that the improvement of sports facilities will not affect the public because they have bustling days. it is true that most of us spent almost every time at school and work. Therefore, we do not have much time to do this activities, especially when we are too tired from our daily activities. In the light of fact that our imperatives are merely our profession and lessons, the probability of us ignoring our excercise will soared. In the end, our consciousness of sports is affected by our surrounding and priority.
In conclusion, The upgrade of our sport facilities will affect everyone, but it, obviously, depend on the people themselves. From my standpoint, i believe that in the future, there will be a large number of people who care about their health, both mentally and physically.Therefore, the government's deed should be based on this notion and more sports center should be included and improved in term of quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, therefore, thus, while, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00874635569 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83280825167 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0315761491 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213980020571 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749544990232 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622378228997 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139513062992 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312331837494 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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