Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Health is one of the most concerning problems in today’s modern world. It is believed that sports equipment contributes to raising the quality of health in the community. Others, meanwhile, argue that the range of methods also enhances the health of the community. From my perspective, sports devices should be equipped along with other productive exercises to gain strong health.
On the one hand, the increasing of sports devices creates a source of motivation that encourages people to do regular workouts. Gyms room is the best example. This pattern of exercise creates an environmental exercise but also installs state-of-the-art devices with ranges of type exercise for multiple choice of user. Modern sports devices bring convenience for users with appropriate selecting and optimized options.
On the other hand, aside from part of sports facilities, healthy eating and effective rest is also important to get a healthier body. Having a balanced diet helps improve the immune system to keep our health from health risks. Moreover, good rest quality also partly contributes to enhancing health. A regular sleep/ wake cycle refreshes our minds and relieves stress and anxiety. It is better to have eating and sleeping habits for our body.
In conclusion, sports facilities partly impact our health in a particular way followed by eating and resting habit. Governments should concern more to the living and citizens’ health. Building central sports is with adequate devices for exercising and stimulating people to have a healthy diet and rest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'help'?
Suggestion: help
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41393442623 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78901497697 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569672131148 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9343432733 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189903575884 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657854796679 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385212215234 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12043569976 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351953173306 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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