Some people say that computer skill should be added to primary school subject in elementary school such as reading, writing and mathematics. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a need for technological skills to be acquired by school children through their curriculum. From my own perspective, I agree that computer skills should be introduced in elementary schools.
Firstly, there is no doubt that the inclusion of computer skill in primary schools would help the pupils improve how they learn. For instance, using technology to learn subjects such as reading, writing and even mathematics would broaden their learning capabilities. Thus, speeding up the amount of time it takes to learn a subject through computer. In addition, audio-visual learning have been proven to be very effective in schools. That is, learning via a screen which is accompanied by sounds. Furthermore, it makes education easier for pupils than what it was decades ago. Thereby, preparing them and equipping with knowledge and likewise with essential skills which will be useful to them as adults. Also, computer skills gives them the confidence to look up information quicker on the internet.
Secondly, in the real world, most organisations uses technology for their day to day business activities. Young adults who acquire technological skill as an elementary pupil will be more employable than one who doesn't have the experience. For example, if a group of youngsters go for a job interview in a company. The ones with computer skills are likely to come out successful in the interview than those who don't. This is as a result of of the computer skills that was acquired. Moreover, employers would rather employ those who already have computer skills as substantial amount of money will be saved from having to train those who don't.
Finally, I do agree that inclusion of computer skill in elementary schools in every subject as suggested by some people will benefit the pupils and the general society as a whole. As every learned person will have the capability to use this technology and progress in their chosen careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1356466877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81611431865 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2608006027 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256167204999 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800370134287 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847436717003 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18099341183 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650249095767 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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