Some people say that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people suppose that the dissapearance of rare species of plants and animals is the major environmental problem of our time. Other people also propose more issues instead. Personally, both of arguments will be discussed in this essay with a number of reasons.
On the one hand, vanishing some speacial species also triggers many risks. Firstly, our ecology is likely to lose its diversity and benefits . For example, worms, which seemingly look disgusting from most feeling of people , all extremely useful for land such as reckoning fertile . Farmers actually do the agricultural works without them and the emergence of this kind of species simultanoeusly help them increase productivity and the quality of products so vanishing worms comprehensively influence too much for our life. Secondly, it truly make governments spends a vast amount of budget on restoring previous ecology. Therefore, our expenses on social policies will be cut down and the increase of tax is a necessary tendency that can be inevitable.
Nevertheless, there are a variety of other issues which are in emeregency conditions. To begin with, Deforestation is currently a dangerous context in the world and has a plethora of risky disadvantages. For example, cutting many trees down relatively affects the global temperature and it is more likely to help it surge dramatically and disasters is forecasted to occur more frequent and its scale is concurrently larger and complicated. Furthermore, coastal areas will witness the loss of seashore sands and it is predicted that more beaches worldwide will be totally vanished which directly contributes to going up the unemployment rate around the globe.
In conclusion, diminishing more species and other consequences are one of a number of environmental issues that we are dealing with day-to-day. From my point of view, tackling all of these are depended on how strong citizen’s solidarity is and determination as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34853420195 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1326284622 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9821428449 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212935196634 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670441284484 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912576707727 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145914631402 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115583432121 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.