: Some people say that the government should invest in trains and the subway system to prevent traffic congestion in large cities. Others, however, think it should build wider roads. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.
In this modern era, the world is progressing by leaps and bounds. The progression of 21st century's human has also spelled a great deal of curse, massive grid-locks are just another example of this. Some people claim that government ought to provide front seat to trains and subway system to get-rid of traffic congestion while other assert making while road can help to prevent this problem. here I would like to discuss my points of view with notion
To start with, investing in trains and subway is a handsome idea to vanish traffic problems in big cities as a large number of masses can travel at same time in one train which further leads to less traffic on roads. for example, a well known city of Australia called Melbourne inclined their investment by 30% in trains over past 3 years which result impressing 14.9 percent less traffic congestions and solved their problem to great extend
Others have conflicting views. They claim that instead of investing more in trains, roads ought to be made more wider to tackle with traffic problems. According to them its not comfortable and private at all to travel in trains with lots of other passenger as they give more preference to travel by their personal vehicle. Adding to it, trains do not have station in every nook and corner hence, people have to walk or wait for other mean of transport to reach their destination so they believe that building wider road is more impressive idea to solve this riddle
In my opinion, there should be a sound combination between wider road and train and subway system so that people may choose their mean of travel according to their tastes. If possible, investment in trains should be made little higher as it is the most convenient way for 100 of people to travel together without disturbing roads
To recapitulate, trains and wider road both are the possible solution to stop the ever-growing traffic problem. bodies should make come up with smart ideas to build a great combination between trains and wider roads investments
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in my opinion', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272479564033 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.16348773842 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0899182561308 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0381471389646 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0435967302452 0.0437548338989 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141689373297 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0408719346049 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4456316911 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0626702997275 0.0326793684256 192% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00272479564033 0.00163938923432 166% => OK
Determiners: 0.0544959128065 0.0861772015684 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245231607629 0.021408717616 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00544959128065 0.011925033212 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2034.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 347.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86167146974 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35446685879 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207492795389 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129682997118 0.203846283523 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0893371757925 0.137316102897 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4456316911 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57060518732 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 63.8623373071 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 34.7 20.7743622355 167% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.5440103673 49.517814964 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.4 127.492653851 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7 20.7743622355 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.814263465372 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.4492795389 49.1944974215 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.85555555556 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400211978762 0.332605444948 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150632943697 0.102741220458 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0757148169624 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.593973969706 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181845020832 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182630954635 0.134430193775 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733162162175 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312478328518 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0495965089308 0.0638462369009 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257826398743 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431163613596 0.058150111329 74% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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