Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is generally believed that the government has the duty to deal with the healthcare and education systems. Nevertheless, some people argue that the population is also partly responsible for the matter in question. In my opinion, I think that healthcare and education should preoccupy both the government and the individuals themselves.
On the one hand, the population pays considerable taxes to the government. Hence, people are entitled to expect the government to allocate some of the money they pay to the healthcare and education systems. The government should ensure that the hospitals and the educational institutions are managed properly and they offer the best facilities. Furthermore, the people in charge should provide education and healthcare also to the people dwelling in remote areas or in poverty, who do not afford to pay for these expenses. It is in the benefit of the government and the country to invest money in these two sectors. A healthy and educated population will certainly increase the labour force participation rate. Consequently, the economic situation of the country is likely to improve as well.
On the other hand, people have to be aware themselves of the importance of healthcare and education in their lives. Being healthy and educated definitely contributes to one's overall welfare. The individuals should show willingness to receive education and maintain a healthy lifestyle. For example, some people neglect basic hygiene rules, such as regular hand washing. In their daily activities they are prone to get different germs that will not affect only their own health but also the people's health who surround them, in case the germs spread. The population needs to know that quality education will give them the advantage and the likelihood to get a well-paid and highly-regarded job.
To conclude, I strongly believe that healthcare and education are vital sectors of a country, which concern not only the government, but the individuals as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ed to expect the government to allocate some of the money they pay to the healthcare and ed...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...fect only their own health but also the peoples health who surround them, in case the g...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.14367816092 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0574712643678 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431034482759 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0804597701149 0.122226691241 66% => OK
Participles: 0.0172413793103 0.0403226058552 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.96148153407 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0459770114943 0.0326793684256 141% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132183908046 0.0861772015684 153% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201149425287 0.021408717616 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114942528736 0.011925033212 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1995.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29337539432 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394321766562 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312302839117 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.249211356467 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.182965299685 0.137316102897 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96148153407 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507886435331 0.56093040696 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7782276955 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6470588235 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1536216688 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.352941176 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.814263465372 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 49.8773427352 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.42352941176 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549713461014 0.332605444948 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120300719075 0.102741220458 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0786307299143 0.0668466124924 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595605922387 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18518284447 0.148594505496 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.264969921363 0.134430193775 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120554001463 0.0742795772207 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.547133068055 0.324371583561 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122549711064 0.0638462369009 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.429835845256 0.228012699653 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820702112474 0.058150111329 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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