Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is not the responsibility of the government
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As taxes are paid by citizens on a frequent basis, it is widely believed that health care and education should be free of charge. However, some people argue that each individual should be responsible for their services.
On the one hand, a healthy and educated society is the backbone of any successful country. Globalization has increased the need to heighten people's knowledge as humanity are entering an ever-increasing competitive world. Therefore, state education should be freely accessible to the entire population. On top of that, as people has paid many kind of taxes, it is reasonable for the government to allocate resources to improve public well-being and services. As a result, possessing a large number of educated and healthy citizens could greatly foster a country's economy.
On the other hand, some people advocate that the responsibility for those services should not lie in the hand of the government but each individual. This is completely understandable as many law-abiding citizens have to pay a huge amount of tax, while the jobless or outcasts still receive the same benefits without contributing anything. This may spark huge public uproar and alleviate social instability. Furthermore, some part of the population prefer to pay in order to receive better services. Truly, many students wish to attend private schools as they are commonly known to eclipse public one in terms of quality. Another example is that the process of waiting for public health care could be extremely time-consuming and paying of private medical insurance could be far faster.
In conclusion, to my strong belief, the government should take the responsibility of providing medical care and scholastic training. However, training to private services could be a plausible option as this greatly reduces the workload for public sector.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...ion. On top of that, as people has paid many kind of taxes, it is reasonable for the gove...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...g and services. As a result, possessing a large number of educated and healthy citizens could gre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36551724138 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98895310533 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8326395866 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.733333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264267717545 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868268718523 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813596848762 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178968898641 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066485615667 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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