some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History.
Nowadays with advancements that have been achieved by humans in technology and science, the importance of learning these subjects are becoming essential. It is asserted by some people that schools should focus more on core subjects like technology and science, while others believe history is as well as core subjects. There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic which will be elaborate more as well as my own opinion.
On the one hand, the importance of history cannot be ignored. To begin with, history is associated with culture and past time events, and a nation’s culture should not be forgotten in any case. Hence, reading history is one of the most effective ways to be truly aware of what happened in the past since the other ways are not reliable, and distinguishing history with fiction is not easy in all the cases. Furthermore, history provides individuals a sense of identity. So by reading history about our own family, we can acquire the knowledge about their events, the way they tackled with their problems and their lifestyle.
However, the reason why I hold the opposing view is that their impacts on the future of juveniles are significant. Learning subjects like history and art is not essential since the do not help them find job in the future. Also, having sufficient knowledge to live in this modern world is vital for young generations for many reasons. The fundamental reason is that nowadays any job position requires a good background of technology, and due to the heavy competition for jobs, knowing about technology gives people priority compared to others.
In conclusion, however the importance of history is by no means negligible, but I do believe that there are more benefits involved in focusing on science and technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... history and art is not essential since the do not help them find job in the future. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in any case, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05387205387 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75362420015 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3264294546 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336085569251 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107465655906 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891727396746 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183641760521 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632599725375 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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