Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that, the major environmental problem of today’s world is the defect of particular flora and fauna, while others argue that, there are many other environmental issues that are affecting the most. The essay will examine the arguments on the both topics.
First and foremost, we cannot deny that, over the time various plants and animals are vanishing from the world due to the over population. People are destroying the wild animals shelter for lodging purpose and harming different species for their survival. Moreover, another major reason of dropping special animals and plants are fashion materials, which are made by different part of animals and travelling and adventure trend of people to various new places. For instance, recently Thailand had closed its one of the most popular island due to overflow of tourist, to save the biodiversity. Likewise, the huge fire in the forest of Australia had damaged thousands of endangered flora and fauna.
Secondly, the extinction flora and fauna effect the human indirectly but there are many others environmental problem like wastage, pollution which effect the society directly, specially the health problems. For example, in terai zone, Nepal government had planned to develop international airport, but the enormous number of trees must be cut down for the development. Similarly, increasing vehicle of growing population and the air pollution made by the same transportation, industrialization, the wastage problem of urban area are the main problems and this effect the citizen directly.
In conclusion, however the main environmental issues of recent time is loss of flora and fauna, while the government should give focus on another problem as well, to protect the environment and handle the situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44244604317 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85517489916 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.198365724 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24030005104 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778631675124 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689200863816 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150457162795 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515821437281 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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