Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A number of experts claim that extinct of important flora and fauna is the major environmental problem of our time, however, there are many others emerging environmental issues. I believe that, others environmental problem like deforestation, air pollution, and global warming are crucial. This essay will examine the views in both topics.
To begin with, disappearance of various flora and fauna can affect the ecological system. There are many plants and animals which help to balance our environment by absorbing poisonous gas from the air. Whereas, nowadays vanish of such creatures are seeing in public health and people are suffering from various dangerous diseases such as, cancer, asthma because of more poison in air. Similarly, extinct of some predatory animals helps to increase the number of herbivorous. For example, if the animals like lion, tiger in the hit list of disappear, so the number of deer, pig are in increasing trend which will be difficult to control and also can destroy the farmers crops as well.
On the other hand, besides the loss of flora and fauna there are different environmental issues like global warming, air pollution and deforestation, which are hampering the environment badly. Due to the overpopulation large area of forest had change into concrete and numerous number of vehicle are creating more air pollution. As a result, people are suffering from drought, famine, dangerous sickness and lower life expectancy. Besides, global warming is also emerging issues from which whole world is suffering. For instance, the recent survey had revealed that, within 20 years universe will suffer from extreme heat if the environmental pollution remains at the same level as of now.
In conclusion, extinction of wildlife is one of the major problem to balance ecology, hence deforestation, global warming, air pollution are biggest and need to look for effective solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82727159873 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.004633267 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182875475674 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629431820772 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634162350191 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117708422677 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948660554839 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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