Many people hold the view that the disappearance of particular animals and plants is the key environmental problem. In my view, while this change should be concerned to prevent extinctions of species, there are more environmental problems requiring human to pay a huge attention.
On one hand, it is reasonable that the loss of some special kinds of trees and creatures influences directly to the biodiversity in the Earth. In spite of the law of logging, every year, the enormous area of forest around the world is cut down to make way for industry and city zones. This damages or even clears the habitats of wild animals living in the forests where the ecosystem is various, trigger them leaving the forest and endangering the residential zone. For example, in recent years, newspapers have regularly informed that the wild animals in near destroyed forests entered agricultural and residential areas, harming human and crops. Therefore, mankind should pay more attention to the deterioration of particular trees and animals, especially in forests.
On the other hand, the climate change and the damage of the ozone layer are the biggest issue that people should concern. One of the most popular phenomena represented the climate change is the increasing of temperature in the Earth leading to the melting of ice in the polar. As a result, floods occur regularly in delta and coastal areas, affecting directly the citizens' lives and safety. Moreover, the ozone layer - a natural defender taking responsibility for protecting human and all species on the Earth - is undermined seriously. The wider holes in the ozone layer are, the more ultraviolet light reaches the atmosphere and attack individuals. These harmful light is the main cause of a lot of diseases in living being such as skin cancer.
In conclusion, even though the extinction of special plants and animals are important issues in present period, people should notice other urgent environmental problems such as the change of climate or the holes in the ozone layer.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1419939577 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80396229413 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7757392562 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189955237323 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641305624935 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817091151965 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137283729036 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870897408505 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.