Many people hold the view that the disappearance of particular animals and plants is the key environmental problem. In my view, while this change should be concerned to prevent extinctions of species, there are more environmental problems requiring human to pay a huge attention.
On one hand, it is reasonable that the loss of some special kinds of trees and creatures influences directly to the biodiversity in the Earth. In spite of the law of logging, every year, the enormous area of forest around the world is cut down to make way for industry and city zones. This damages or even clears the habitats of wild animals living in the forests where the ecosystem is various, trigger them leaving the forest and endangering the residential zone. For example, in recent years, newspapers have regularly informed that the wild animals in near destroyed forests entered agricultural and residential areas, harming human and crops. Therefore, mankind should pay more attention to the deterioration of particular trees and animals, especially in forests.
On the other hand, the climate change and the damage of the ozone layer are the biggest issue that people should concern. One of the most popular phenomena representing the climate change is the increasing of temperature in the Earth that leads to the melting of ice in the polar. As a result, floods occur regularly in delta and coastal areas, affecting directly the citizens' lives and safety. Moreover, the ozone layer - a natural defender taking responsibility for protecting human and all species on the Earth - is undermined seriously. The wider holes in the ozone layer are, the more ultraviolet light can reach the atmosphere, attack individuals and mainly cause a lot of diseases in living being such as skin cancer.
In conclusion, even though the extinction of special plants and animals are important issues in present period, people should notice other urgent environmental problems such as the change of climate or the holes in the ozone layer.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1498470948 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81101284605 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.8646138002 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.538461538 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1915906706 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679734729057 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837401278453 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137551140422 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868226078675 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.