Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is believed that the major environmental issue of our era is the loss of specific species of plants and animals. While others consider that actually there are more significant environmental issues. From my perspective, I strongly agree with both of the two problems above because I think that they are related.
Firstly, to maintain a balanced environment must protect the endangered species of plants and animals in the wildlife. As known as the rare and unique plants bring a lot of advantages for the human with medical properties. Furthermore, plants considered as the base in medicines all over the world. Secondly, like the plants, the animals also make different values for people as well as ecosystems in nature such as the tonic made from the liver of the fish, the birds kill the harmful insects,… Thus, saving endangered species and plants as well as saving ourselves.
Finally, besides, other important environmental problems are the garbage of the human from factories, vehicles, activities,… now, some people have some bad situations. After using bottles of water, nylon-bags, packages of products, and similar others, they throw away alongside the street, drop some species of stuff along the river, or under the body-trees,… it leads to contaminate the environment, especially it is contaminated groundwater and soil. The last consequence is the plants and animals died and our own health is at risk.
In short, the basic environmental issue in the modern generation now is keeping the plants and animals as well as reduce a large amount of waste from the households and factories and not throw away litter anywhere.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i think, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20676691729 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92901538037 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4982758416 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.909090909 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285245177083 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101299299619 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589976741427 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160935522026 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728697080846 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.