Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In the driven-technology eras, there has been a colossal upsurge in discussing the advent of advanced technology has brought more convenient and advantageous ways for shoppers or not. It is evident that this trend has both pros and cons. In this essay, I will cite some appropriate points about this issue and give my opinion that whether electronic commerce tends to negative or positive influence on society.
On the one hand, cutting-edge technology has been creating more chances for people to expose to novel ways of purchasing items. Firstly, it saves time and money for people. In the midst of the computer-driven age, people not only need a few clicks on the screen in order to make a payment but also enjoy a range of promotions on the electronic commerce website. Secondly, there are many pages aiming for people in comparing price, quality, function, etc so as to wise choices in shopping. It is obvious that people can interact and contact the retailers as soon as possible without going outside. Thirdly, shopping online plays a vital role in certain circumstances. Perhaps the example of this would be in the Covid-19 pandemic, due to the lock-down policy from the government, it is undoubtedly that people can't shop outside, and the only way to limit the communication among producers and buyers is dealing through the screen. That's the reason why bleeding-edge technology can help us survive and spur the recovery of the damage from the outbreak of disease.
Considering the reverse aspects of this trend, there still exists some limits once disbursing online products. To be clear, it is a range of anonymous accounts on the Internet which can take our money by frauds and scams. Moreover, it is a few proofs for us to check the real quality of our products by introduction word on the website. Furthermore, in some situations, customers may suffer from the flaws in a product due to delivery service, weather conditions, etc. In some current research in the UK, a major volume of clients complains about the inferior experience once shopping on e-commerce even expose to information theft.
In conclusion, electronic commerce is admittedly associated with two sides: one positive and one negative effect. It all stated that people make use of their tremendous benefit in terms of convenient accessibility, easy comprehension, etc. In spite of some potential hazards in this trend, I personally believe that the merits we can earn from its is outweigh its demerits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...comparing price, quality, function, etc so as to wise choices in shopping. It is obvious...
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Line 3, column 810, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...vernment, it is undoubtedly that people cant shop outside, and the only way to limit...
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Line 3, column 931, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...d buyers is dealing through the screen. Thats the reason why bleeding-edge technology...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...that the merits we can earn from its is outweigh its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, as to, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06326034063 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91882184443 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581508515815 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8966347147 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.526315789 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136539001993 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361955935089 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249188496116 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785219763186 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364592563428 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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