Some people say that music is a good way to bring people of different age and culture together.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that music is a good way to bring people of different age and culture together.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that music is uniformed way to bridge the population of different age groups and cultures together. This essay will highlight why it plays an imperative role to bind them together and also discuss the fact about those who have their own preferences in terms of music.
Most preponderant reason that I believe music is not a particularly a good unifier is in terms of generation gap, this is to say that masses, specifically older generation tends to follow their own liking for music symphonies. For them classic melodies are not only harmonious but also meaningful as compared to the current music genres. The rap music for example, lyrics and rhythm that it follows is irrelevant to most of the older people because of the abusive language and the meaning that it reflects; it escalates more aggression and blues. Hence, difference between the choices of music is reflected between the generations due to the taste and music.
However music plays a pivotal role to create a connection among the people across the world regardless of their ages or the culture that they follow. Good music acts as a stress buster and mood elevator and people follow even if they understand the lyrics of the music or not, they just sway with the sound and the feeling that it creates. A good example is the song 'Dispasito', despite being a Spanish song it creates oneness among all and everyone enjoys it equally whether it is a dance party or a Dj night this song is always played. Therefore, this universal feeling of love music seemed to be enjoyed by all.
To conclude, music is a language of souls, which needs to be understood and felt, although people may have their own choices and preferences, still it uniforms the generations and cultures together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83720930233 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60830179176 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526162790698 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7811824516 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.666666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40494245207 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157367409925 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220175493825 0.0667982634062 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288818368529 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.289501090816 0.056905535591 509% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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