Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are numerous individuals who argue that music positively helps people overcome and break their cultures and ages barriers. In my opinion, t completely agree with this idea and my explanations will be discussed hereafter.
Listening to music bring people close together regardless of their cultural foundations and ages. To begin, I would argue that music surely inspire people reduce misunderstood between generations. This is because of the melodic rhythm of music representing emotion of composers as well as audiences. By making efforts to feel the melody, people are possibly able to understand what others are having in mind and share with them. Moreover, music have connected many different cultures when people have a chance to experience a new genre originated from another part of the world. For example, when pop music first arrive at Vietnam, people regardless of their social foundation adore it. Subsequently, numerous pop stars from all over the world have performed in Vietnam.
If technology has invested to spread more to rural areas, it will make a huge change. As people listen to music daily, they stand a good chance of reducing cultures and ages differences. In addition, relationship between citizens in separated countries and continents will become much better if the governments encourage companies to establish musical instruments trade. By doing that, people will be offered numerous opportunities to encounter new cultures which is likely to cancel cultural difference.
To summarize, i am totally of the argument that music is a beneficial methods to solve cultures and ages methods. Besides, this trend will be more efficient if technology investment and instruments trades are considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4312267658 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90942487665 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5980902065 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333995007143 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105245748523 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702731964338 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184102361492 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557108079487 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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