Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Nowadays, entertainments are becoming necessities of human to get relief from the hustle and bustle life. Some people claim that, smart phones are the best device to watch movie, while others argue that, in cinema people can enjoy more. This essay will examine the arguments on both favor and against of the topic.
To begin with, with the easy access of internet and smart phone, recently people are enjoying movies at home. The great advantage of watching films in smart phone, you can save money and time both. Similarly, you do not have to go through hassle of purchasing ticket and you will not get message of “sorry tickets are sold out”. For Instance, Netflix, I flix, torrent is the great example, where you can watch online movie free and some others movie which are release on online as well. However, you cannot have the facilities of paused and re-play in cinema, so you do not have multi task anywhere. Moreover, you can enjoy family time and make memories with them.
On the other hand, cinema hall can be amazing place for refreshment, where you can reduce your stress and hang out with friends with your favorite cuisines. For example, recent survey had revealed that, more than 50% people prefer going cinema at weekends to relief their stress. Similarly, you can experience your awaited movie in big screen, high picture quality and amazing sound system with great atmosphere. Furthermore, it can be best place for socializing and child can learn social skills, such as, sharing, problem solving, making new friends. In contrast, you can enjoy 3D movie and animation, which are not available in smart phone.
In conclusion, smart technology can help to save time and money and multitasking facilities at one device, while sometime hanging with friend and loved one in best place also necessary to make life more colorful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ou can watch online movie free and some others movie which are release on online as we...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...h great atmosphere. Furthermore, it can be best place for socializing and child can lea...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...etime hanging with friend and loved one in best place also necessary to make life more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96463022508 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34554400939 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8449748531 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186076670131 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668955511297 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513662583277 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108550177824 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648106763423 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.