Some people say that only reason for learning foreign language in order to travel to or work in foreign country. Other say that these are not only the reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that only reason for learning foreign language in order to travel to or work in foreign country. Other say that these are not only the reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is certainly true that, there are many more reasons behinds learning foreign language such as for travel, work or many others. It is often argued that popularity of learning foreign language is increasing day by day with the motto of travelling or grabbing the opportunities to work three, whilst other disagree and think that not only these are reason to study overseas language, there are many more other reasons to consider. This essay agrees that knowing abroad language helps people to enhance skills as well as enjoy more new facilities. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that learning overseas language definitely creates comfort zone to human for visiting new place and work in new environment easily. Moreover, it further helps in understanding and communicating with foreigner easily with aim of achieving desired goals effectively. It is therefore agreed that knowing several language boost the confidence level in individual and develop the career and personality internationally. For example, this is most evident in my country that nowadays maximum number of Nepalese student are learning Japanese language in order to enjoy the working visa offered by Japan.
However, many disagree and feel that apart from travelling and work, there are many other reasons behind learning other language as it helps in gaining more knowledge about various country. Furthermore, variety of language provides information about other traditions, custom, religion and scenario which helps new comer to sustain in unknown environment. Likewise, it will be more fruitful for study purpose also. Despite this, sustain in new environment is still possible in travelling or working. For instance, according to research of 2015 conducted by “Nepal Tourism Board” of Nepal showed that about 80 percent of people study other language for traveler work purpose only.
In conclusion, studying overseas language for travel and work helps to gain more experience about new place and create fame in other country through effective business performance, some still feel that there are other reason like to have good conversation and adapt new environment people study other language. At last I personally think that capability of understanding foreign language should be with people so that they can grab the opportunities provided by other countries.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...stom, religion and scenario which helps new comer to sustain in unknown environment. Like...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...will be more fruitful for study purpose also. Despite this, sustain in new environme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, likewise, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77802497413 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0720627027 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.933333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329910647114 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108045872309 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793485609337 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213285658344 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746105197875 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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