Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that there are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it has been emphasized that the international relationships between overseas has been developed which leads to people to learn foreign languages. A vast majority of people emphasizes that the main reason for learning different languages is travelling to abroad or working in foreign countries. Therefore, others claims that learning languages does not depend on these reasons. There are valid arguments on both sides of this issue which I will discuss now and try to draw conclusion.
In one hand, while moving to overseas for different purposes, it is essential to know their local language or some of international languages as English. A massive amount of people learn language for being able to communicate in different countries while they travel as tourist. Moreover, it is also evident that if you are employed in foreign country, you have to study their language first. However, these issues are seemed to be only reasons for learning foreign languages but actually there are other points as well.
Despite learning languages for travelling and working in abroad, there are other mandatory purposes of knowing other languages. These days, a plenty of youngsters prefer studying abroad which leads them to learn other languages. Although, translators and interpreters have also to know diverse range of languages which is crucial part of their work. Besides, knowing and studying different languages help to develop intelligence of human, broadens mind and improves communication skills. It is noteworthy that learning different languages has massive benefits on human.
All things considered, learning a foreign language is not compulsory only for travelling and working in abroad. Despite these reasons, it is crucial also for developing self, being able to translate, interpret and etc. Personally, I think that everyone has to know at least 2 different languages even if they do not travel to abroad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...elf, being able to translate, interpret and etc. Personally, I think that everyone has t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as for, as to, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4219269103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84516146544 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518272425249 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.4344021085 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339181098088 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12875666438 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997697254906 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230429962611 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062450410043 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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