Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child‘s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A lot of people believe that parents are the ones who mainly take responsibilities in the growth of both personalities and appearance of their children. However, there are some opposite views stating that other attractions, like their peers or social medias are more predominant in their maturity. While each view owns its reasons, I personally think that parents are always the role models that youngsters look up to during their childhood and later on.
On the one hand, parents are the closest people who live with us under the same roof since we were born. As a result, that their behavior has affected their children is inevitable. Gradually, kids tend to imitate what they see or hear to build up their own ego. Furthermore, nobody but our parents understand exactly our strong and week points as they have witnessed every of our change we have made. That is why they are able to provide valuable advice in order to orient us the most suitable direction.
On the other hand, teenagers nowadays are more outgoing to be affected by their friends or channels of social media. Adolescents feel more comfortable and easier to get along well with those who are in the same generation since they share the same interest. Nevertheless, television, one of the popular social media tools usually offers such a variety of knowledge, which let children expose to the dynamic world outside. Parents, to some extents, tent to limit their understanding, as they always want to keep their children under control.
To sum up, not only parents are merely responsible for the development of their children but friends or television also plays an essential role. However, my view is that parents act as the main features in the process of growing up of youngsters.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68337685056 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2393023376 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16362914017 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546970106507 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400165964563 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102279074342 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041863015268 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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