Some people say that university student should pay the full cost of their education
other say that university education should be free
discuss both views and give your opinion
add relevant example from your own knowledge and experience
In this age of cut throat competition, higher education has become the prominent part to lead a successful lifestyle. Whether university student should pay their educational costs or not has sparked a heated debate. IN this essay, I would like to state my views in for and against of the statement with my notion
Multifarious points are there to shore up my view. To start with, education Is something which requires dedication and full attention to master. Thence, it is next to impossible to carry your education along with working in order to support your education. so, education should always be made free for students. To be specific, one cannot top the education while doing job and there is no place for those students who remain average or above average. while others have conflicting views.
According to them, Students are often spotted wasting their time in doing useless curriculum activities like as watching movies, playing and so on. They believe that the time being wasted in these activities could be utilised by working. Thus, they can support themselves by utilising their free time. For instance, APJ Abdul Kalam, the former president of India, used to sell newspaper in order to support his study, became the famous scientist of the country later with his own hard work
from my notion, few year of study has to decide our whole future. better not to risk it by donating your time to work on account of supporting your education. So, government ought to step up and make study free for students. On contrary, free time must be fully utilised by student by working if they can afford to do so without hurting their study
To recapitulate, it is said that today's students are the heroes of tomorrow. government should offer all the possible help to these heroes so they can put their nation on shiny side in future
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235632183908 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.17816091954 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0775862068966 0.0946595960268 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0431034482759 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0747126436782 0.0437548338989 171% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126436781609 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0603448275862 0.0403226058552 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53441119609 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0545977011494 0.0326793684256 167% => OK
Particles: 0.00287356321839 0.00163938923432 175% => OK
Determiners: 0.0488505747126 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0316091954023 0.021408717616 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00574712643678 0.011925033212 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1847.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86349206349 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336507936508 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24126984127 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15873015873 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12380952381 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53441119609 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 68.2937015703 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6875 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7420085492 49.517814964 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4375 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.814484127 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.42718446602 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193494938705 0.332605444948 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103531762489 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692711446485 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493092893844 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141456452611 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762779385682 0.134430193775 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324500603315 0.0742795772207 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235592501488 0.324371583561 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0402137293353 0.0638462369009 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121183213468 0.228012699653 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219863711947 0.058150111329 38% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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