Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an increasingly growing popular idea that watching TV affects children. While there are strong arguments that the length of time children spend on watching television has a significant impact on them, I strongly believe that the content of programs has a greater influence on the youth.
On the hand, there are a variety drawbacks when children devote much their time to watch TV programs. Firstly, they become addicted to the TV for entertainment like cartoons. As a result, they could fall into a sedentary life and neglect outdoor activities. For instance, in Viet Nam, many busy parents indulge their children by being willing to open any TV program they want, aim to encourage they eat or keep them silent instead of investing their time in soothing them into obedience. Thereby, their sons and daughters have less interaction with parents and people around them. Secondly, if children keep their eyes glued to screens for a period of time, they may suffer from eye-strain. Waves from TV may cause bad consequences such as headaches, the obesity epidemic and type 2 diabetes.
On the other hand, the content of TV is a double-edged sword for young viewers which have the most direct impact on them. For one, it is no doubt that television gives the youth countless opportunities to broaden their knowledge and affects the ways of behaving. Besides, there are myriads of programs that have resulted in a sharp increase in forming bad behaviors. Youngsters learn about alcohol, smoking use and break the law, ergo, the juvenile crime rate is getting rapidly could be taken as a particularly salient example of this.
After discussing all the points mentioned above, I could finally conclude that I would argue that spending a long time on watching TV affect children, I strongly believe that they under the influence of the content more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 642, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... keep their eyes glued to screens for a period of time, they may suffer from eye-strain. Waves...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00323624595 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65420312943 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8548744687 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255115097125 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810108235113 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647698474089 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156532246578 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491776638274 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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