some people say when a person travels into a new culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. what extent do you agree or disagree? -- DISAGREE
For the past ten years, tourism has become the backbone industry of many countries. However, tourism can create conflicts at times between people from different cultures when difffering beliefs collide. Therefore, it is often suggested that people should follow the local lifestyles of the country they visit. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this motion.
To commence with, the attempt to adapt to all local customs wherever people visit is highly likely to exert a negative impact on individuals themselves. First and foremost, this obsession with multicultural lifestyle is the main determinant which is a motive for losing their own cultural identities. It is alarming that people especially youngsters always idolize and emulate other cultures of every place they set foot on or change the core values of themselves to fit in a particular environment. As a result, they may find foreign practices an indispensable part of themselves and a great substitute for their national traditions. This can inevitably lead to a total loss of cultural identity.
Apart from that, the hope to be habituated to all local rituals can intensify the possibility they have to subject to a mental illness called cultural disorder. This condition is caused when they apply themselves to have plethora of different habits and makes them unconscious of what lifestyles would be appropriate in each regions. Therefore, the determination to adjust to every tradition can land themselves into a situation in which not only they lose their cultural unique values but also have some completely strange improper behaviors and beliefs.
In addition to that, the society can reap a lot of benefits from the persistence to hold on to their original customs of international visitors. That they bring their traditional cultures to every part of the world will be the fundamental foundation to make their national identities widely known across the globe. Both tourists’ and locals’ perspectives of cultural distinctiveness in all over the planet will be significantly broadened, which can make the residents take interest in their tradition, therefore, attract more international travelers to their country. Furthermore, if individuals have the intention of take residence permanently in a place they visit, their own national practices will definitely make an enormous contribution to the formation of a multi cultural society.
To sum up, I wholeheartedly believe it is unnecessary to alter individual styles to a foreign community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49618320611 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13087135956 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.156399209 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.058823529 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186698516927 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578109267211 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362536020415 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093900799552 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537480882237 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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